atones - Warm & Dry

[atones]

Hey all.

This is the first thing ive done to this level of completion before, even tho its not very complete.
Id love to hear some feed back on the tune itself but some mixing and mastering ideas would be great too.

Im pretty new to this so be gentle :D

http://www.feedingedgar.com/atones/warm&dry.mp3

Edit: oh im more than happy to start reviewing, not sure how much feed back im going to be able to give considering i still dont know much.

Cheers guys

[mungo]

This really needs some additional elements brought into it along the way, as it stands there is a lot of the same with only one real variation in the entire song. The mixing is passable but all the perc is trying to use the same space, pan them out and EQ them apart.