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The track is half done.... I was just interested in some feedback.
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TUNE (http://www.slutzonline.com/irc/mp3/finger%20me%20plz.mp3)
hpstekno
09-Jan-04, 10:34am
/me moanz :p
dude nice work there very platipusesque
try some compression when the kick drops at the moment it swallows the rest of the track too much ;)
Originally posted by hpstekno
/me moanz :p
dude nice work there very platipusesque
try some compression when the kick drops at the moment it swallows the rest of the track too much ;)
cheers mate.... i havent compressed / eqed anything yet... i was waiting for that till the end...
thanks for the tip stud ;)
BlueSteel
10-Jan-04, 04:53am
Stud, nice work. It definitely has an old skool trance feel to it. Love it.
You have sounds in it that reminded me of Keleidoscope - The Art Of Trance and also 2 Full Moons. (both fucking awesome trance tunes)
Dont forget to send it when you've finished it.
Keep up the good work.
Originally posted by BlueSteel
Stud, nice work. It definitely has an old skool trance feel to it. Love it.
You have sounds in it that reminded me of Keleidoscope - The Art Of Trance and also 2 Full Moons. (both fucking awesome trance tunes)
Dont forget to send it when you've finished it.
Keep up the good work.
Cheers mate thanks for the review : ))))))
Maurizio
10-Jan-04, 03:35pm
:) I love this track. Nice work.
VigilanteLocust
11-Jan-04, 02:59am
considering it is only half finished, you've got a great ear for production values. it's not too overpowering in composition, the writing is solid and your sounds are really crisp. nice work ;)
Astro-Boy
11-Jan-04, 03:27pm
Noice oni0n! Very impressed.
Make sure you post the completed track!!
kthxbi;)
Kid.
chrisb_
12-Jan-04, 01:54am
sound pretty nice
nice riffs..
like the intro beat
some of the backing synths sound a lil weak outta the filter - but nice under the lp.
very oldschool sounding. nice man.
nice kinda width on the track.
cool stuff
id thicken up the percs but they sound cool in the minimal way theyre being used now..
//chris
smokinman
12-Jan-04, 09:21am
excellent melodic track, very uplifting. The kick sounded pretty big on my headphones.... I reckon its just begging for a massive buildup just where it seems to end.
be sure to post the next version
Awesome feedback guys I really appreciate it.... thanks so much : )))) Ill make sure I'll post this tune when its finished...
dunefield
13-Jan-04, 06:41am
Man trance is CACKED!!!
but yeah this tune is decent man... it's not like that gay commercial shit like ummmm... darude...
props to you...
oh and maurizio who is that girl in your avatar...
Originally posted by oni0n
The track is half done.... I was just interested in some feedback.
TUNE (http://www.slutzonline.com/irc/mp3/finger%20me%20plz.mp3)
Great Stuff.. I'll just agree with all the above. I actually pulled out some of the old Platipus albums the other day.. this wouldn't be out of place at all.
phunkdust
27-Jan-04, 11:07pm
It's nice shit dude, just work on the compression/EQ, and finish the goddamn track!
If people keep posting up unfinished and demo and "just playing around" shit im gonna chuck a wobbly.
Still nice shit dude. Maybe throw Waves C4 over it and crank it up and get a nice sizzly compression.
SimPill
01-Feb-04, 08:52pm
Good tune.
Sorta 4am stuff, nice and floaty. Great mix - like early Leftfield.
At 3 min i found the lead riff a bit hard, but this might just be the after effects of a serious good vibrations weekend.
...felt a bit robbed when it suddenly stopped @ 3:30...felt much shorter so signs are good. Keep at it!
Sounds orright, seems to be a bit too much stereo seperation init. and yeah it needs eq and comp rah rah rah.
Oh, and it wouldn't hurt if it was finished either - ;)
ImNotADJ
02-Feb-04, 01:09pm
Onion - finger me please
Starts promising a song of epic proportions. We are on a build ladies and gentlemen, we are on a build.
Kick may be a little heavy and muding up the sound? I've got the crapy headphones on so I can't really say.
Ok, we didn't get the big build but I've mellowed out nicely and I'm bleeping along. Chilling at 3:20 and you've constructed your sounds well to this point and HEY! Where'd it go?
Alright - you're poised to build big to 5-6 mins then dj outro.
Please post the finished product as that will be where the proof is.
$: 0%
:offchops: : I'll tell you when you're finished
Chilling: I'll tell you when you're finished
Xelpmok
03-Feb-04, 04:42pm
sounds good so far. maybe the snare is a little dull but thats about it. FINISH IT ;)
great so far oni0n - sounds very oldschool..
does remind me very much of old union jack - terra ferma - platipus sounding stuff..
the synth arpeggios you have going are very tight.
in my opinion though the pad could do with a bit more complexity of both sound and choice of notes.
this is more a stylistic thing - maybe bring the kick in along with something else to give your track structure more intensity.
Originally posted by dunefield
Man trance is CACKED!!!
but yeah this tune is decent man... it's not like that gay commercial shit like ummmm... darude...
props to you...
oh and maurizio who is that girl in your avatar...
do you have to be everywhere dunefield?
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