Teknic B - Running Out of Love

[sco77k]

New track guys

http://www.mp3.com.au/track.asp?id=71518

[ImNotADJ]

4:30 into this, first listen - I like your compositions and your use of vox. I like. Actually I like this alot.

This track will need some tech analysis though.

(I'll post more later after my standard 6 or 7 listens.)

[sco77k]

Thanx man, let me know what you think after the 6th or 7th time :P

[mungo]

Pan something! You are overusing stereo FX without even panning anything X(. Stereo FX require a solid stereo image to build their effectiveness off. The snare is just flapping away, there is no space for it above or below.

[sco77k]

bump

[kenada]

bump, there's no need for that - I was getting there ;)

Mungo's right you know, the hats are dead centre and theres no much stereo going on with that lead that it almost makes me feel giddy. Turn down the auto lfo pan on the lead and give the hats some breadth.

And For God's Sake - Get Rid Of Those Infernal Drum Rolls They sound so shit, and cheapen what your doing. If you do feel compelled to use one, change it up, don't just use a repeated one.

The change at 5:25 sounds like a totally different song, and considering that with an outro of 16 bars this could've quite easily been the end of the song. The vocal is too mushy, needs to be livened/excited eqing will do this. The transition at 6:53 is so so aswell/ but it's just coming back to song #1.

See what I mean about the rolls, take the change up at 7:23, you've got this piss weak roll and then it jusdt break out huge with the bassline and all. It just doesn't build any tension, it just happens then the bassline drops. I'll say it again, find new bridging techniques.

your mixing is getting better tho. :)

[TrickmA]

yeh sounds nice man,

gee some of you are good critics hehe..

I'll upload some of my tracks soon, interested to see what you's say.

[ImNotADJ]

Originally posted by TrickmA
gee some of you are good critics hehe..



Kenada knows his shit.

[TrickmA]

i gathered.. hehe :)

[phunkdust]

16th DRUM ROLLZ ARE TEH BAAAD!

that left-right pingpong panning is irritating. ruins what would otherwise be a decent track. At 1:58 you break into a totally different musical theme with no conjucation. WTF? No random breaks into different themes thanks.