Gazbats - The Block

[gazbats]

Would love some feedback on where I'm at with my productions..

I think finally I've got some nice drums happening.. they're not super crisp
but I'm pretty happy!

Check it!

http://members.optusnet.com.au/gh1980/

Its called 'The Block' coz I was watching the block when I saved it and my
imagination wasn't working to its full potential!

Any feedback would be great!

Cheers

Gaz

[mungo]

Pan or the lack thereof is really irritating.

The percussive sound matching the perc lead is really bad, were you just too lazy to write another rhythm? The atmospheric sounds arent working at all, this could have been a deep dark interesting track, as it stands it just some of the same old same old.

[smokinman]

this is a MONO mp3 accoring to winamp, which might account for the lack of pan???.I quite like the groove but it could do with some variation.

Overall, I think it needs some extra parts to keep it interesting, its just too repetitive for my liking.

[DJ GeRmAn]

It's ok, a bit too boring for my although the work on the fx etc is all nice. Overall I'd say maybe a 6.5, entertaining wise lowered the overal score.

[Joules2]

there r some nice ideas in here, and after the first minute, Im quite liking it.

but it really sounds like a track only half finished.......


the drums have some nice subtle variations in there. Add some more subtle variations, and they wont put me to sleep.

the bassline sounds a little quiet and doesnt really do it for me (the first one i think). R u using a preset sound? It just sounds so ordinary.

Im writing this review from memory, but I remember thinking that either the first or second bass sound u used would probably sound really cool with some vibrato towards the end of some of the notes...


overall though, with a little tweaking this could b a good 2 minute demo.......but u really need some more ideas or things to happen if u expect ppl to listen to it for the full length of this song!

[gazbats]

Cheers for the comments guys.. will be taking all of them on board..

I'm learning all the time.. I only just learnt on the weekend that the drum sampler has multiple outs so you can tweak each sound! Jesus!

Anyway! the feedback is much appreciated!! :)