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Delerium - Silence (Adamski007 stripped back rmx)
Finally got around to completing this - all feedback welcome if you get a moment - cheers

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Commented on the SC page. Could by style, but is the room reverb on everything? I reckon you could pull it back just a touch and still get the verb sense.
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Nice! Without the vocal this would be a cool understated track, not that I don't like the vocal, it's nice to hear it again.
Is it me or is there a very slight tuning issue on the vocal? I reckon it's very slightly flat, also if you eq out some of that scratchyness, it might sit a bit easier in the mix. Maybe just a soundcloud issue though..
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Very smooth mate, great work.
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Made a few changes, new completed version - all feedback welcome

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Monkeynauts View Post

Is it me or is there a very slight tuning issue on the vocal? I reckon it's very slightly flat

Yeah, there's something well off with the vocal IMO, just sounds yucky to me...like the deepness and smooth feel of the track, but the moment the vocals started it went cold for me...and I like the track usually, has great memories for me, but there's just something wrong with the tone/pitch of the vocals for me
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Yeah it is definitley a little bit off as Its not the original vocal which is know where to be found so that acapella went through quiet a bit of processing....cheers for the feedback though - much appreciated
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Defo Improvement mate, like the furniture you've added in, ties the whole thing together. Vocal is much better too
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Thanks for the feedback guys, really appreciate your time - its download enabled if you like, cheers
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Really like this track man, think you did really well with it....

Putting this in my next podcast (If thats cool with you?) link below

http://itunes.apple.com/au/podcast/t...st/id509430893
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Thats fine mate, glad you enjoyed it.....i just wish Soundcloud would encode to 320 instead of 128 and crushing the life out of our work, i mean if your paying for your account with Soundcloud you really should have that option for a decent quality encoded file.
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dope take on it matey.
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Good to hear a remix that does justice to the original. Great tune, nice work.

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yeah i also like this remix. nice work
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Did you guys record the vocal?
The lyrics she sings aren't the original lyrics and sound like its sung by someone who's native language isnt english.

I not sure how I feel about ripping the fade version for the entire breakdown but the rest of the track is good(not too keen on the vocal for the reasons listed above)
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Deeeeeeeeeep. Reckon this would go down a treat in a warmup set, with the suprise of such a cool remix.
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Nice and deep mate. Pads sound lush.
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