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Shepz - Always in Autumn (Original Mix) [Melodic Minimal Tech]


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Nice vibez mate, liking the bass

Think it needs stepping up a gear after the first break, maybe some kind of pads shifted up an octave from the lead guitary synth?

let us know if you make any changes, it's got some good potential!
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Left some comments on you SC.

I like it dude, good work.

I think the first 2 minutes could include a couple more percussive elements here and there to keep it chugging along. Same after the first breakdown. It doesn't sound repetitive, but I think a couple of extra variations with percussion could add to the track (not really a new melodic element, just the perc with some fx would tie it all up for me, then again it's a matter of taste)

Really good work, it sounds great.
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