A listen would be appreciated more than you know.



http://soundcloud.com/conor-lorcan

not bad.

needs a bit more construct to it, its pretty much just a 303 line over a stripped back version of the original.
some experimenting with drum patterns and chord progressions would give it more depth.

but in all, not bad

i give it 3 stars......margaret?

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Originally Posted by special ed

i give it 3 stars......margaret?

Great line.
I was just really excited to get an acid pack; probably need another synth line in there; drums were pretty minimal as well.

Hey, thanks for giving your $0.02, much appreciated - just downloaded the Winter Mix as well - reminded me of Nicholas Jaar

Tom Middleton Cosmos remix >>> your remix

It's OK, but needs hats and snares desperately imo

Just gave it a listen - It's a different sounding track to mine, sure, but it's better
I guess he does do it for a living though - but yes, snares, claps, hihats, I don't even know WHY I didn't put them in.

I have never heard the original but there seems to be plenty of room for more elements and variations without detracting from the overall vibe. Nice and very usable foundation though.

Thanks Joe. I fixed it up, got some percussion now!



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