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Orbital - New France (Conor Lorcan's Acid Remix) - Free Download
A listen would be appreciated more than you know.



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not bad.

needs a bit more construct to it, its pretty much just a 303 line over a stripped back version of the original.
some experimenting with drum patterns and chord progressions would give it more depth.

but in all, not bad

i give it 3 stars......margaret?
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Quote:

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i give it 3 stars......margaret?

Great line.
I was just really excited to get an acid pack; probably need another synth line in there; drums were pretty minimal as well.

Hey, thanks for giving your $0.02, much appreciated - just downloaded the Winter Mix as well - reminded me of Nicholas Jaar

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Tom Middleton Cosmos remix >>> your remix

It's OK, but needs hats and snares desperately imo
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Just gave it a listen - It's a different sounding track to mine, sure, but it's better
I guess he does do it for a living though - but yes, snares, claps, hihats, I don't even know WHY I didn't put them in.
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I have never heard the original but there seems to be plenty of room for more elements and variations without detracting from the overall vibe. Nice and very usable foundation though.
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Thanks Joe. I fixed it up, got some percussion now!



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