[seannash]

so im working on a collab with a fella ollie jones.
just gotta nail a final mixdown and sort out some final details(effects and build mainly)

thought id throw it up here for some feedback before i go tweak it for the last time

http://soundcloud.com/seannash/sean-...kbps-rough-mix

[Radic]

a bit to bright for my ears with the hats when it kicks in. i'd tame em a little or change the sample/ turn volume down? rest of the track sounds nice so i wouldn't eq the entire mix just to fix the hats/ shaker (whatever it is). the big white noise build up is a bit too loud and rips my ears a bit. overall the sounds need a bit of thickening up but that's probably just my personal taste. cool composition dude. a few tweeks and some proper mastering and this would work on the dancefloor i'd say.

[seannash]

thanks for the feedback man.
listening back now i can see what you mean about the high end.
i mixed this down with tired ears so i probably over compensated for that.
thanks for listening